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The following comments are for " Love In the Afternoon"
by the demure 1

Amazing!
After reading The Wrangler I wasn't expecting this of Demure. The picture drawn of quarreling lovers is stark in her use of just sounds until the chilling "Why" which stands alone amidst the sounds. What a drastic change for Demure. She has more to her than we thought!

( Posted by: witchy woman [Member] On: September 14, 2003 )

surprising
I wasn't expecting this at all. At first I thought it might be pornographic, then it seemed to be about domestic vioelnce, then I thought maybe a fight with someone leaving the home for good. And now, finally, I think it's about a murder in the forest, as woodland creatures watch in horror.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: September 14, 2003 )

love...
I kind of agree with viper9 but then i thought...wait i go through that list every time my car wont start...
just a thought.

( Posted by: wally 5 [Member] On: September 15, 2003 )





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