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i rarely feel this way,
& it always goes too fast.
I often usher in the future
Just to brush away the past.
I'm trying to control it,
I'm trying to ignore it,
The calling of the magic,
That is knocking at my door.

Victoria Reed


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by Edens_wench

Let it in...
Isn't symbolism great? The first six lines could be taken as 'life' where the last two could be 'death'.
Either way it's all magical to me...

( Posted by: The Universal mind [Member] On: September 21, 2003 )

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