Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote Now, we wait in an un-moving world, Filled with death and destruction, We wait for a war to stop, No more worry, Though we do move forward, We know not much of the future, Fore there maybe be no future, Of an un-moving world of hatred and death, In which time is ever slowly coming back to life, This place where colore is infinite, Yet impossible to behold without, but on negative comment, This place where once there was Un-timely peace of the people, Yet now, tis' gone, Tis' just too sad to think, This may be my fate. Am I, the only one that does not truely hate? ------ ~Steven-Denmark~ ____________________________________ "Remember Forever And Never Forget"

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