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As you can lose it

At the most inopportune time

and tears are for days when it rains

So no noe can see you cry

And painting on a happy face is hard

But...it is harder to feel real

In the naked truth of painful reality

And clasping your can hurt

Because heats cannot be ruled

And love cannot be controlled

And life goes on

And your heart is frozen

In a golden claps of pain

And my heart is stone

And my love is gone

And the clasp of my heart

is shattered

And your goodbye left a vacant spot

Where my feelings would have been...

Tania


------
T. C. Walsh


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The following comments are for "Clasp my heart"
by Tania

love
love has to be the most complex of all emotions. really loved the quote "Because hearts cannot be ruled

And love cannot be controlled"
in that few words, are so many truths. really enjoyed reading this poem.

( Posted by: soulblade [Member] On: September 11, 2003 )





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