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World shattered,
dreams tattered.
Damn it all
because nothing matters.

Silently crying,
woefully vying
for something, anything
to send my hopes a'flying.

Living, loving
the shadows memories are casting,
paining, hurting,
torment everlasting.

I remember well
that one time
when you turned from an angel
to a pile of wretched slime.
That last kiss
that pure moment of sheer bliss
that last thing we shared
until every word you said
was a scornful hiss.

Our arguments outward rang
a horrible dissonance we rang.
Then all ration turned brash,
and at you I lashed.

A knife I took
and cut deep,
ending your life.

Then knowing
I was now alone,
turned it on me
and ended mine.

I think sigs are dumb.

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