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Author’s Note: I am just making the past up for this story; I do not know exactly what happened.

Part Two.

After hours of planning what to do, they camp up with a plan shortly after noon.

“There are two exists and entrances to the room. The door and the balcony. The balcony had infrared lasers that activate the alarms. The main door has a keypad you punch the code in, but that can only be activated while turning a key. Anything is out of whack, the alarm goes off, you’ve got 50 seconds to get your ass out of there before you’re dead,” Dom replied.

“I’m never gonna get in,” Brian muttered. “No one will.”

“I can get in,” Dom said quietly. “Ramon knows I can convince anyone to do anything. I once convinced Ramon that he was Indiana Jones,” Dominic said with a laugh. “All I have to do is go to him and tell him I got a grudge against you. Tell him I can get your sister to trust me. In the I’ll convince her to tell you to clear my record and get Douglass’s brother out of jail.”

“Will it work?”

“Yeah. I can be very persuasive.”

“No shit,” came Letty’s voice.

“Letty,” Brian remarked. “Thought you left.”

“I did. Mia and I are going to pick out dresses. You’re invited Brian. To the wedding. I doubt you’d enjoy dress shopping.”

“As I was saying- I’m very persuasive when I want to be.”

“Brian, did Dom ever tell you how he ‘persuaded’ me into bed at 16? After years of ignoring me?” Letty sat on the couch next to Brian. “He was so persuasive he coaxed me into bed to fuck my virginity away.” Brian didn’t know what to say.

“Letty! I’m ready!” Mia called, coming down the stairs.

“Great. See ya, Brian,” Letty remarked, standing and sauntering away.

“See ya.” Dominic’s eyes were averted toward the ceiling.

“Hey Brian? Need a knife?” Leon called from the kitchen.

“No. Why?”

“So you can cut you way through the tension,” Leon and Vince laughed.

“Very funny,” Dom remarked. “When do we start?”

“Whenever you’re ready.”

“Let’s go for a little ride,” Dominic said, grabbing a set of keys from a table by the front door.

“Right now?”

“Your sister is alive, but for how long?” Brian didn’t answer him. He just looked at his friend in awe.

“Thank you.”

“Yeah, well I go to jail if I don’t help you, right? C’mon. We’ve got a sister to save.”

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