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Never wanting to be wanted
The hopeless form is crying
Slumped in the corner
He fears all but nothing
In the dark alone
You can feel his shivers
His pain is all he knows
Bitter he is the hopeless form
Lighten his load he won't
Take in all the blame
He saves the world another argument
Never asks for help
Rushin towards painless death
Blindly speaks "wisdom"
Gazes all with innocent eyes
You're to vain my friend
Evil is what you behold

Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?

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