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Dancing with you,
Swaying to and fro,
Hair smells nice, that I know,
My hands beign to shake,
We are so close,
I feel your heart,
It beats against mine,
The world around us is gone,
I feel blind,
Yet I still see you, my eyes must be fine,
Still I feel your heart,
Becoming one with mine,
I feel your body warm pressed against mine cold,
You, I wish to forever hold,
Kiss your neck, now your lips,
unable to peek,
Lying on the couch unable to speak,
Feel the cool breeze wash over me,
Feels so good, feels so free,
Lying here now, whispering sweet charms,
Could lie here forever, you in my arms.

"Remember Forever And Never Forget"

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