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Hospital smoke room
sallow faces, eyes haunted
waiting for the end.

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In five hundred years time, most of us will be forgotten dust. But Hitler will still be remembered, God loves irony.


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by Ogg

Mood? What Mood?
Just because life is a never ending black, smelly pit of futile despair and I write inadequately about it since feeble words cannot describe the gloom of oblivion that faces us - you assume I'm in a MOOD?
Hugs
Paul the depressed Ogg

( Posted by: ogg [Member] On: September 12, 2003 )





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