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Slumber good slumber
From the depthes
Of the deep
I will not wake up
Because I'm asleep
I drearily drowse
While I browse
Through a dream
Where I stand on a beam
Of sunlight


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When the winds of the west blow, it is called Farror, for he is the god of all wind.


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A few spelling mistakes that I could pick out, but other than that it is good. It gave me the feeling of floating around silently with my eyes closed. Could that be defined as dreaming also?...

( Posted by: Rage2Fury [Member] On: September 17, 2003 )





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