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Canít I
Speak to you
Without fear, shaking
So nervous
Sweating
To perfect
Iím mute

Canít I
Stand to see
Your face
Avert my eyes
Itís haunted me
Kept me awake
Iím weak


Canít I
See that you feel for me
Even a little
A fraction
Of what I feel for you
I only hope
Iím blind

Canít I
Show you these things
Without destroying myself
Paralysed
But I cannot wait
Have to try
Iím scared

Canít I
Know that youíll care
I donít see it
I canít say it
I canít wish it
But can I hope?



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The following comments are for "Can't I"
by shadazar

beautiful
what a lovely way to express the inadequacy many of us humans have felt at one time or another, especially in regards to sharing ourselves. Thank you for sharing.

( Posted by: MzJen1 [Member] On: November 16, 2003 )





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