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Spring


Flowers of white snow.

Birds fly back to their home hearts.

My life is joyful.




Summer


Golden ray on me.

A window on the water.

Above me, the sun.




Autumn


Wet leaf on the road.

Back from the dream of pleasure.

Again ... to life!




Winter


Cold wind, cold water.

Brave waves break at the harbour.

I meet, I embrace.


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The following comments are for "An exercise on seasons"
by ursus

Seasons
~Ursus~
Nice Haiku you have here. All in one nice little wrapped package
Spring
Summer
Autumn
Winter
I loved each line

{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 1, 2003 )

Thanks
I am happy to see that you love them! :)

( Posted by: ursus [Member] On: September 1, 2003 )





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