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Through Day and Night I'm chasing after you
Never reaching the goal I set out to.
I am the moon and you are my sun,
Whenever you finish I have just begun.

Halt at least briefly in your splendor
And let me get close enough to view.
For though the stars keep me company at night
Tis only because, at day, they cannot compete with you.

Radiance is what you bring into existence
But I know that on the inside you cry.
My world surely does revolve around you
So let me be your partner in the sky...
Oh, I wish to be near even for a second
Because every month, without you, I wane and die.

------
AbdelSalam Kaleel


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The following comments are for "Chasing After You"
by arkaleel

stronge
i loved the line.."I am the moon and you are my sun,
Whenever you finish I have just begun"
just shows how stronge this feeling is, to have it detailed like that, forgive me but i cant really find the right words to say, so ill end it like this-moving poem, loved it.

( Posted by: soulblade [Member] On: September 3, 2003 )





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