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I'm sprinting after success
And this race is mine:
First place has become a NEED, not an excess.

Time to rest is granted in the grave
So I'll tire myself on the roads less traveled-
And every dusty trail crossed I will pave.

Twenty four hours granted in our pursuits per day-
Winners and losers are similar
No more than in this way.

And....
IF THERE REMAINS EVEN ONE STONE UNTURNED
IN THE FIELDS OF VICTORY
UNDERSTAND THAT "COMPLETION" WAS WELL YEARNED
BUT I'VE BEEN HELD BACK ONLY BY DESTINY

------
AbdelSalam Kaleel


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The following comments are for "Sprinting After Success"
by arkaleel

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jeez, I liked this. Success is another word that's been pidgeon holed into meaning monetary or other such trivial achievements. Thank you for dragging it out of the gutter of capitalism. :-)

I suppose it's been a message delivered in many ways before but it's worth repeating. My suggestion is that the capitalization should be eliminated as it's distracting and does not add emphasis.

May every road you travel be an unfamiliar one. Keeps life 'interesting'.

7/10

( Posted by: Penelope [Member] On: August 31, 2003 )





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