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Humanity stripped,
Canines tearing the flesh,
From within, words of irresponsible mothers and fathers brainwash.
Dogs of war, mounting the soul, becoming the child-like faces of assassins!


Self-loathing manifesting into a corporeal dog,
Because of early childhood abuse,
The hound takes form to protect, solve, preventó
Feel the breath of war; inside the children struggle
good/evil
evil/good
Despicable torture for the young!


Beaten and mangled, they stand still, screaming for vengeance!
No more infant autopsy at the hands of drunken parents!
Or pubescent rape,
Elementary schools homeless,
Books burned and strewn about,
Illiteracy, HIV soiled syringes on playgroundsó
Save the silver threads of faith in the future!

LET GO THE DOGS OF WAR!


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Things that are done can be undone.


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The following comments are for "Dogs of War"
by hfox9er

sic em!!!
very powerful, giving voice to the silent victims of all that is wrong in this society today.

Ready to do war!

( Posted by: SinamonAngel [Member] On: August 29, 2003 )





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