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I know
Itís been rough before

You wonder
What you are here for

I have
These feelings for you

I hope
You feel for me too

Open up your eyes
So I can make you see
Everything you mean to me
Open up those eyes
so you can see that youíre
So much more than a body to me


I know
I may not be hot

But I know
I can give you all the love
you deserved but you never got

Itís your smile
That can make me so weak

But itís your eyes
That make me feel like Iím
Everything I ever wanted to be

Open up your eyes
So I can make you see
Everything you mean to me
Open up those eyes
So you can see that youíre
So much more than a body to me

(music to fill time)

Open up your eyes
So I can make you see
Everything you mean to me
Open up those eyes
So you can see that youíre
So much more than a body to me

Youíve always been more than a body to me






















------
Fear was Here



Comments

The following comments are for "Body"
by Fear

Pretty cool
Pretty cool song, though a bit more literal with the lines "I know/I may not be hot" than I would have liked. But, I can appreciate the sentiments of the song, and it's fairly original. Had a very nice start to it, too.

( Posted by: Fire Goddess At Sea [Member] On: August 24, 2003 )

Well...
Can't say as I like this one, no sir. It's more than a little sacharrine for my tastes, insipid in fact. That doesn't, however, mean that it's bad. For what it is is actually quite good.

I could imagine this coming from the corporatized mouths of Britanney Spears (I don't care if I spelled it right, and I don't have enough respect for her to want to learn). This is perfect pop-song material. Is it great art? No. Does it have to be? No.

Keep it up.

( Posted by: enforced bliss [Member] On: August 25, 2003 )





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