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So soft and delicious,
I salivate,
My mouth closing
Around your circumference,
Biting gently
Into your golden brown,
Tasting your semisweet,
As I ponder the question,
"Got milk?"

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"I must create my own system, or be enslaved by another man's"-William Blake



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The following comments are for "Consuming desire"
by Malthis

ahhh...
Heehe, I get it! Sweet.

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: August 15, 2003 )

*Chokes*
Erm, clever...I grant that...

*There are no words*

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: August 15, 2003 )

On second...
...reading, and with a right good slap up the head from Pen's comment...I retract my original comment.

This is VERY clever!!
*Is still laughing!*

( Posted by: Jasmine [Member] On: August 15, 2003 )

mmmmmmm
nothing like a freshly baked cookie in a lovely ice cold glass of milk, makes me very tired.... Miss is it nap time??

( Posted by: colwyn [Member] On: August 15, 2003 )

Well so did I at first
I dunno I think everybody did at first, or maybe just us men!!

( Posted by: colwyn [Member] On: August 16, 2003 )

lol
can almost picture a milk mustache! lol

( Posted by: SinamonAngel [Member] On: August 16, 2003 )

hmmm
I did not envision cookies when I read this the first time....but rather two bite brownies LOL J/K My mind was planted firmly in the "gutter"

hehe

( Posted by: SinamonAngel [Member] On: August 16, 2003 )

Shame on all of you!
You're all a bunch of Perverts!

LOL

Yes, it's a chocolate chip cookie.
Thanks for your input.

( Posted by: malthis [Member] On: August 17, 2003 )

Conceit
its brilliant conceit... a modern example. I like the way it plays in the mind!

( Posted by: webguy [Member] On: April 2, 2004 )





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