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Tip-toeing in the sand
Sea shells washed a shore
Castles being built
People having a ball
Going skinny-dipping
All the lights went out

"If we will seek the counsel of the One who keeps us, and not of our own understanding; Then we would accomplish much, much more" - ~Jeannie Simpson~

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The following comments are for "The Beach"

the beach
what got me, was how short this was, and yet how clear you got the point out. everyone can write a long poem on the beach-but to sum it up, in so few words-its something i believe is hard for some, easy for others. very nice.

( Posted by: soulblade [Member] On: September 6, 2003 )

The Bbeach
Soulblade: Llove that screen-name

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 8, 2003 )

SoulBlade: Thank you for your comments. sorry it took so long to get back with you, but I have beeen very busy. Also, I enjoy reading your poems

Tthank you again
Ggod Bless You

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 8, 2003 )

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