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Why does everybody keep asking?

The answer is always the same.

I'm leaving it up to Him.

It's easy for me, I don't really have plans.

Why does everybody keep asking?

The answer is always the same

It's as foggy to me as it is to them!

It's far in the near future,

so let me be!

You'll know when it happens.

I'm leaving it up to Him.

The only plans I have is to do the best I can.


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Live like He's coming back today.


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The following comments are for "I'm Leaving It Up To Him"
by NuttyGummy

Cute...
I don't know if this is what you are going for, but that's a cute little poem you got there. Perhaps it could have used some more...detail, but frankly I like it how it is, for what it is.

( Posted by: Darkshine Raven [Member] On: August 9, 2003 )

Glad you made it!
Good to see you on this site! I like this, I haven't seen many poems by you but I'd like to see more.
-GTR

( Posted by: GhosTRunner [Member] On: August 9, 2003 )





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