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I thought she was my best friend,
I thought she cared!
She told me, and I was so unprepared
-to hear she likes the same person as I,
shes pretty, and has a chance, and I am not

She knows how much I love him,
But still she has the nerve and flirts
With him in class and all over,
He talks to her and she does back, she knows how much it hurts
-me. When I see them, I just want to scream!

All I want is to kill her! For her to be gone, out of the way!
If him and her get together,
I will never speak to her again!
Id cry for days altogether,
Be depressed, not leave my room, not eat.

*for ever there*

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