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I hear the screams
And see the stains
Of a fearful world
Without restrain

I hear the cry
Of slaughtered life
As the bombs
Rip through like knives

I hear the lies
Those deceitful lies
That pass as
Truth in exchange for
Life

They tell their lies
And have their fun
Whilst all around them
Comes undone.


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The following comments are for "Propaganda"
by False Dawn

interesting.
you could be writing about anyone here, parents, Lawyer or just your average MP. but i am sure is't not.
it is good stuff, very deep without actually going deep... and very angry, i like!

PS sorry about the missunderstanding.

( Posted by: man eating maniac [Member] On: August 7, 2003 )

interesting.
you could be writing about anyone here, parents, Lawyer or just your average MP. but i am sure is't not.
it is good stuff, very deep without actually going deep... and very angry, i like!

PS sorry about the missunderstanding.

( Posted by: man eating maniac [Member] On: August 7, 2003 )

It's ok
This was written when i was going through a non-conformist stage. I think the message in it can be very specific or very general, depending on how you want to look at it.

( Posted by: False Dawn [Member] On: August 7, 2003 )

Re: your comments
first of all, this is a very poignient poem and very relevant to the worlds plight on many levels. Well Done.

The capital M's on My, reflect a personal lifestyle choice.

Thank you for popping by and reading! much appreciated!

( Posted by: SinamonAngel [Member] On: August 9, 2003 )

Thanx but...
Thanks for the comment, but I don't quite understand. How does capitalising the M on my making a personal lifestyle choice? :S

( Posted by: False Dawn [Member] On: August 9, 2003 )





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