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Iíve been stupid, Iím done something horrible,
I asked to just be friends, because I thought
-I didnít like you, but now I know I was wrong,
it was a big mistake, Iím sorry I ought
to have known, how much I loved you.

All I want is a second chance,
To make everything all right again,
Please forgive me, just give a little faith.
It can work out, I can explain
Why Iíve done what Iíve done, and said what Iíve said.

*for ever there*

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