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Poetry I cannot write,
I haven't got the gift nor sight.

If only I could stop to rhyme,
It sits in your mouth like juice from a lime.

I only write what's in my head,
I really should just go to bed.

But try I must,
It's do or bust,

That's all I have to say.


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The following comments are for "The Problem"
by Queen of the Hill

Regina Nemo
At the risk of sounding conceited (yeah, that's rare for me) I believe these offerings are meant for me. At least that's what I get from the hints you've dropped.

Rather than continuing to play around via an electronic intermediary why not let's cut to the chase.

If you want to get ahold of me try, enforcedbliss@hotmail.com

I'd give you my new number but I'd rather not post it here (a little more public than I like).

I hope to hear from you soon. Until then take good care.

Sincerely; "A lump of clay who won't own clay"

( Posted by: Enforced Bliss [Member] On: August 2, 2003 )

I like it
Funny. This is what some might call super-duper!

( Posted by: Bigyellowmonkey [Member] On: September 19, 2003 )





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