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What is feeling beautiful? It's that song that makes you touch your hair when you sing it. It's the starry night you live your dreams in. It's the breath you take when you see the one you love. It's the "punch drunk " feeling you get, after laughing at your favorite movie. It's the smell of your childhood, you catch a glimpse of, while passing a field in your car. It's buying a new outfit, that hugs your body just right. It's a reminder of an old friend, that they miss your sweet face. It's waking up to a peaceful silence, and looking through your window at the sun. It's completing a project, you drowned every waking moment into. It's looking into your child's eyes, and seeing yourself shining through. It's the sorrow filled bliss, of having a crush on a person that doesn't know you exist. And finally, it's looking into the mirror, and seeing yourself smile. Smiling for every memory your mind captures, for you are the reason you see beauty in the first place. A small child in this big world.
Fall in love with yourself all over again.

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krazi-Renee


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that was beautiful

( Posted by: suez-q [Member] On: October 12, 2003 )





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