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It’s not that far for us to come
from where we live to Huntingdon.
so this trip’s now routinely done.

These months have passed, and Max is One!
Into the hearts of all he’s won
his rightful place, and this he’s done

Proved himself to be quite charming,
quick with smile that’s so disarming.
He displays determination;
at the centre of attention
have his way, no limitation.

His future gives no revelation;
is far beyond our comprehension
so hence we make this affirmation
unwaveringly -

that things we cannot look into
we do believe and trust God who
has all things under His review:

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