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if I fall asleep crying
will I wake up feeling happy?
and if I go to sleep
with a smile on my face
will I wake feeling disgraced?

~ Brandan Michael.

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by fbomber125

My mother used to advise never to laugh

At the time of going to bed in the night

As, next day would be full of sorrows

But, going to bed sadly may bring bad dreams

As per mom, chant some prayers before going to bed

So,dreams would be guarded by the almighty!

( Posted by: mvvenkataraman [Member] On: October 18, 2019 )

That's some good advice your mom gave you. I love how it brought up memories of your mother when you read it.

I was alluding to my mental health / illness and how my mood and emotions can change rapidly and drastically.

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: October 22, 2019 )

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