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In a fun-filled face framed by flaxen hair
are set eyes that shine with a blue-fire hue.
And I, looking in, at what I see there,
find forget-me-nots of the palest blue.
You're someone who's so easy to remember.
Your face and form are never far from mind.
Ways artificial do not you encumber.
You are someone who's just one of a kind.
One who with easy grace does infiltrate
the mind and heart with bonds personified.
By unaffected warmth insinuate,
creating there a bond-ship I can't hide.
'though few in years, and so diminutive,
affection blooms that's pure intuitive

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