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There's a rainbow
Stranded in a puddle
On the dirty ground

And this rainbow
Did not ask
To be trapped
In this watery hell

No it longs
To be free
To spread it's wings
And fly high
In the blue sky

So take my hand
Let me lift you up
From your certain death

This will not
Be your end
My elusive friend

~ Brandan Michael.

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