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Your utter delight at thisorthat--- joie de vivre as the French dub it
That implacable sangfroid, so childlike and endearing
Your voluble ruminations that chase each other
Like silver rivulets on the picture windows
You, beloved are the loveliest human being I know
With your upturned nose and the gay bunch of flowers
Sprouting on each silken-soft cheek
Your easylaugh--- Oh that laugh!
It remedies this sad browbeaten world we live in
Beloved, here I am with you--- awed by your capacity to feel things keenly
And your insatiable appetite to swallow yet another finely-etched hangnail moon!

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