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The World today
Such a dark place
Turn on the News
Only to look away
Your happiness
Eaten by anger and fear
Your warm heart
Turned cold by the years

This truth I know
Scares me so
Naked and alone
Shedding tears
For the setting sun
The end is near

~ Brandan Michael.

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