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when
i
kiss you
upon
your
cherry red lips
you
light up my life
and
i
want to make things right
between us
in the sunlight
yeah
i
know
darling
you
set the right conditions
well
you
just give me
one day of living
my sweet darling
the love
that
we
both deserve
and
i
am still sure
love bends the heart


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