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*(Dona S., the woman to whom I regret losing my virginity.).


You bragged of giving your cousin good head
for the huge sum of twenty U.S. Dollars
tho' you felt you're worth one-hundred instead:
so Dona, you are no lady or scholar
(as you like to believe). Of your hundred
lovers or more you prefer all the black guys;
grinning, you were so proud to have bedded
them because of their enormous cock size.
So when you deceived me (you wily Lolita!)
and stole my virginity you—so proud
of yourself—smiled like the repugnant Medusa
while I, repulsed (by you), could cry out loud
'cause you're so crude and crave 12-inch long schlongs
even your dad says your beaus ne'er stay for too long!

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