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My whole life
I wanted to die
Now that I'm dying
I want nothing else
But to live

Not enough minutes left
Not enough
Hours in the day
My friends

Hate to say goodbye
All I want is hello
Hate to see the end
All I want is to begin

~ Brandan Michael.

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