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Would you let me be your dawg.
To heel by your side
As my tail rests heavily against your thigh
Soft pants and heavy silent sighs
Howl through my dog house
As my head rests lazily inside,
Your lap,
I snif claiming new territory
To where my bone hides
Between pedals of ruby rose
My nose,
You tickle as your sweat trickles
It collars the nape of my neck
You pet my brows as our souls met
In four legged tussles
where bites worse than barks
Were better
Causing wetter
laps, that licked
Love and lust together.


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by B Baller

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