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Her spirit is so deep and rare
(and like a rose which blooms afresh
with a glow that is fresh and fair,
and lovely in aspect and flesh),
She thrives in sunlight without care
as earth and sky together mesh.

Her winsome force is hard to find
unspoiled and not impotent;
and with Her heart and with Her mind
She quells my swelling discontent.
As She soothes (me) closely from behind,
Her words sound strong and resonant.

With power and with great focus
She peers into my darkened soul
and heals it with a clear locus
which makes my mind and body whole.
Without Her life's out of focus
and I would not be in control.

"To have the soul of a poet is to feel with the mind, and to think with the heart."

~Ngoc Nguyen~

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