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The night talks
as I walk
whispering uneasy thoughts
of loves lost
of times gone
of a past
I'll never be free of

and the rain falls
as I call
out to the heavens
I scream
I plea
with my last breath

but the wind blows
and it remains

~ Brandan Michael.

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