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maybe you don't know
maybe you don't care
maybe it's just a joke to you
but it's all I am
it's all I'll be
it's all I'm trying to do to keep
my head above the water
to keep from drowning
to keep from dying
I'm just trying

maybe you don't know
maybe you don't care
maybe it's all a joke to you
but I'm gasping for breath
I'm clawing at the water
I'm trying to loosen this knot
around my neck

so it's not a joke
no I'm not joking
this is not a joke
but you don't care
no you don't care
you just don't seem to care

~ Brandan Michael.

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