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I met a girl today
She was made of tears
So sad was her sickness
So sweet were her fears

And I know it's my fault
Why I'll never see her again
Because I chose to remain quiet
When I should've screamed instead

And I ask her every night
But she never responds
Because the dead can't forgive
No matter how much you want

~ Brandan Michael.

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