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She is done.

One more time she gave her heart to a man who promised to take care of it.
But, alas, with lies and hurtful words, he drops her heart and it shatters.

For the last time.

She is tired.
She is not putting it back together again.
Even if she did, it wouldn't work right.

She realizes that she has learned to be happy when she is alone.

She is better alone.

This is where she is now.

And she is okay with that.


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