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I felt Enervated
After he left
I drifted through life
Slept most of the time
Took years before
I felt alive

Enervating is what she called it
The woman with the notebook and pen
Who'd listen to my thoughts
And pushed pills at me
A breakthrough is what I needed
She would say
I was waiting for a change
To join him in the ever after
To die, to be at peace
But in the meantime
I had to live
She said to leave the "Enervating"
In the past...

Now where do I go
From here?

~ Brandan Michael.

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