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On February 1st,
On Main Street America,
A child in torn jeans
Sees his family struggle
Without jobs, food and hope
As he sees his world explode
Through a broken window
Having to walk barefoot
Through the glass,
With hunger biting
Through his stomach,
His eyes swollen with tears,
And the road ahead in his life

Full of tears, scars and thorns.

------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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