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in
the middle of
the floor
i
still
i
hear
the flourish roar of
her
dragon red dress
that
i
adore
while
the
flamenco dancer
spends and twirls
with
her
Castilian castanets hands
she
stares
into
the
the witnessing crowd
with
her
Spanish gray eyes



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