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Our eyes met and
It was love at first sight.
Your dark gown
Your slender frame

The way you could
Click your fingers
And people would
drop at your feet.

I knew that when my time came
Nothing could keep me
I would be yours forever
'Til death do we meet
My dark angel.

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