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Wrapped in a blanket of splintered ice
Cold and uncaring....
It seeps into my bones,
Freezes the marrow inside
And I feel how much it stings....
My skeleton hurts...
It dances with pure shock and need for escape
It fuses into my skin, the cold does...
Bleeding into my core
I want to scream
But the only thing that hears my plea, is on printed paper.
My words
Written by a pen....
I only pray I escape soon
Before it's too late

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