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New level, seek closure to this chapter
wondering lost on empty paper
discovering there is more to the ink I wondered
torn into pieces, the grain of paper creating burns on my feet
a long canyon to jump onto the next page
sit and sit, so small, distant, alone
looking into the deep black hole of a page gap
finding the foundation to begin across this divide
worries and neurosis deepen the soul
am I ready, this happened quick, bridges burned
I hold my self back, I fuck my self. White to red quick
force in directions, confusion, colors of deep hues
a box closed with my turmoil

imagining ideas of loneliness fascinated the ego
ending relationships that were toxic, gone too far
carried the idea beyond the psych
became reality, new, uncharted thoughts and emotions
isolation is the existence, reality, being now
indeed the next chapter is living the fascination
the dark deep page gap onto the next is blocked
denied by the conscious to realize this reality
bridging and making amends, reflections of years to become
cloudy, intoxicated, dulled and shoved to the id
realization once was front that is now tamed

the cold, very cold chilling weather reminds my soul
the wind is cold and has always blown through my heart
no place to fight and to move onward blindly
leap into the cold wind knowing you may have seconds
freedom is new to my peculiar awareness

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