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for my K-9 companion,

~'twas those days
more God filled than these...
love, was much more abundant
in carefully woven ingredients,
felt more, and more naturally.
today, the forest is shaven-
clipped away from the wooded
land it knew... dies from shock.
and tears fall from heaven
for smaller life than He.
as a small animal, is pulled
away from his owner,
terrified into darkness,
as its silver door closes
in front of me...

David T. Culver

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