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Time comes and goes
but nothing changes
its all the same friends
the same nooses the same traps
and tricks and trades
and what I'd give
to see it change
but an accident is an accident
the flowers always wither away
the clock never stops ticking
the child cries
his father dies
silence silence
the cat and mouse
friends and enemies
Tom and Jerry
what is left
what is left
head full of static
nothing makes sense
erase erase
where is the end
where is the happiness promised
where is the land
made of milk and honey
from here all I see is chaos
and traffic and buildings
and fire bright bright burning fire

------
~ Brandan Michael.


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