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Freezing rain
an icicle assault on my skin
I was a fool to walk today
a dirty taxi's easier
but here I am half way there
and I won't turn back now
I'll stand my ground
I won't be turned around
I'm here to fight
tooth and nail
round to round
I won't quit
I'll still be standing
just wait

~ Brandan Michael.

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