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Night sky
Holds my eye
Lost in star light

Cold wind
A black emptyness
Stands a clock, broken

Where did it go
Went unnoticed
Bye, time

Sleep depraved mind
Blood shot eyes
Ghosts haunting
Just out of sight

Seeing what isn't there
Not fair, not fair

All I need
It evades me

How many days
Since I've dreamed
Can't count, can't count

Looking for a way out
Waiting for day to break
Waiting for the sun to save me

~ Brandan Michael.

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