Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

People come and go
but here you'll stay
so many days since I saw your face
it's slowly fading from my memory
your once bright eyes
now dull, cold and void of light
your laugh once so full
and bursting with life
so silent now
as it falls on deaf ears
my memory fails me now
all I have are pictures
to remind me of your brilliance
and brightness and loveliness
but they fail to capture the true you
how true how true how true
how, how I miss you

------
~ Brandan Michael.


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Your Grave"
by fbomber125

Simple and deep
Sometimes poetry becomes more about style than sentiment, but i did like this poem- especially the repetition of the last words which really conveys a sense of dispair. Sorry for your loss.

( Posted by: Shaza89 [Member] On: August 25, 2017 )

Thank you
Sometimes my poems are more like ramblings, just thoughts I have to write. I rarely edit them or read them over before posting them. They always read different from the poems I spend more time on.
I guess what I'm saying is thank you for liking my rambling / poem.

( Posted by: Fbomber125 [Member] On: August 26, 2017 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: